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Re: A Monster, A Feind...
I like this. Your imagery was good, and not cliched. I know a little about OCD, an this seemed to portray it quite well. The only thing that bugged me ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Laptops
There's those notebook ones that are th size of a book or something. Thoe are cheap but i've heared mixed reviews. On one hand they're small, but my old iPod ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Dialect
I'm writing a novel set in Conneticut, but I live in Michigan, so people have told me some of the slang is wrong. So, for anyone who lives in New ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Would a character smoking in a novel bother you?
I don't mind smoking in a book as long as someone doesn't just whip out a cigarette randomly and you're like "What the heck? They smoke?" It has to fit ...
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: Long Travel Portions
I had that same problem, where my characters were on a 13 hour plane ride, and it was really long, but I didn't want to skip it, because about 1% ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Between Darkness and Dawn
Thanks to everyone who reveiwed this! Unfortuanately, there's not going to be anymore for a little while until I fix this screwy thing that happened with my Word program.
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: Outline?
I make up the characters and a little of the plot in my head, but eventually it goes off track (and is probably better that way).
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
This was really, really good. I'm not sure what it was really about, but the imagery and tone was fantastic. It had a really nice flow, everything meshed together well ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Royal Reviews
It would be great if you could review this: It's the beginning of a novel (kinda romance, kinda saga-ish) I'm half done with, and I just can't get it to ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Down in the Valley
I think this would do better in the lyrics section. It sounds very much like it was meant to be a song. Overall, it was pretty good, unusually and not ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Would you rather?
Cockroaches. I had a grasshopper once, and it wasn't awful (don't ask). New: Would you rather be a vampire or a darkangel? (neither has to be evil)
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: No Chat-Speak
Yea! finally.
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Loss of Imagination
Very, very true. I personally have teachers who tell us to do thre ditto sheets, then sit quietly, calmly, and in our seat for the next 25 minutes. Staring at ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Chocolate and Cigarettes
This was fantastic. The only thing I caught was one you spelled "was" as "wazs".
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: The Legend of the Sainted One
This was okay. It was a lot of contradictions. Sometimes it rhymed, sometimes it didn't. Sometimes it seemed to take place in modern times, sometimes it seemed like a world ...
Nov 19, 2008
